Cross Country Writing

Finally it was the year 5s turn to run I got to the starting line Miss castle said “Take your mark,set,go before the loud BANG! I was running I run past Mrs Hiku down the hill suddenly I was in the lead.In till Brooklyn past me my face turned red because something was at the back of me. “Ahh!’ I screamed as I ran from something it was a girl,she had short hair,two legs and two arms I ran past Mrs Mundy she said. “Why couldn't you run like this at practices’’ I said “Nothing’’ I was running  up the hill it felt like I was climbing mount everest my feet got sore and sore I went past the builders.And I went straight to the field suddenly Janaya past me when I got to the back paddick I was walking till I got to Janaya she started to run and I caught to her when she was running suddenly Janaya started to walk and I said “I hope you don’t come last’’ Mariah was at the back of Janaya I was trying to bet Brooklyn but she was already at the.Finish line I tried not stop and let Janaya and Mariah pass me but a let janaya past me because I was to tied and I looked at the back of me Mariah was already walking when I looked to front Janaya was at the finish I tried not to  let Mariah pass me so I run as fast as a cheater.when I got to the finish line I got a mark on my hand that said 3 after all the races are done the teachers give out the 1st 2nd and 3 place medal.

We are leaning how to write about cross country.

I found it hard to write on a paper because I was thinking blank.

Next time I would like to write another story.